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raketka [301]
3 years ago
6

Can you edit and add more information to this research essay??? thank you!

English
1 answer:
Dimas [21]3 years ago
5 0
There are quite a few things wrong in the 1st paragraph such as a transition word isn't present, you can shorten it up by combining a few of the sentences, never start a sentence with "But" just erase it all together and caps lock the w in What. change blow to inhale we don't blow smoke we puff and inhale it then blow the smoke out.  smoking can cause not smoking cause. more than 400,000 people die each year due to smoking would help fix the 1st paragraph up some.

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