1) Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. uses repetition to give his speech rhythm and momentum. (2) "Let freedom ring” is a phrase which i
s used many times in his speech. (3) "Let freedom ring” is a phrase that leads to an exciting conclusion. Which revision combines sentence 2 and sentence 3 most effectively?
The best revision to combine sentences two and
three is this one:
<span> "Let freedom ring” is a phrase which is used many times in Dr.
Martin Luther King Jr’s speech that leads to an exciting conclusion.</span>
<span> In order to construct correct compound sentences, you should omit words
that contribute to redundancy. </span>
