“sham process”, “fearful, traumatized youngsters”, “under current immigration laws”, and “hurtling children back” all show the authors purpose, their use of pathos shows this. hope this helped!
It looks great! One thing I always struggle with as well is dividing paragraphs. This is important, it looks neater and is professional.
I think you should also add how at first, Hades and Persephone refuse to help, but then Orpheus uses his harp and sings about his grief, which persuades them to help Orpheus.
Good luck!
The oracle at Delphi is a figure of great historical importance that was, and still is, shrouded in mystery. She spoke for the god Apollo and answered questions for the Greeks<span> and foreign inquirers about colonization, religion, and power.</span>
The myth of Achilles in Greek mythology tells the story of a hero that was bathed in the River Stix by his mother, who held him by the heels. While the rest of his body became immortal, his heels did not. Later, he was wounded by an arrow in his heel, his only vulnerable spot, and died from that wound.
As an epithet is a descriptive word or phrase that sometimes appear in place of a person's name, an apithet about Achilles would be related to his story and attributes. So the correct passage is "<em>He ceased; a gush of grief began to rise</em>". It mentions his death--"<em>he ceased</em>"--and the <em>gush of grief</em> that also represents his bleeding wound.
