Being a Hero
If you want to be a hero, you need to know how to be a hero. A hero is a person who protects the town. He has to have super powers to protect people from the bad guys.
There are different heroes. All heroes have powers. But they have different powers. And when they get together and fight, they are unstoppable. Every each hero has different super powers.
Every hero has to have fighting skills. A hero must have fighting skills to defend the town. If the hero has no skills, he will be no hero. Every hero needs fighting skills and different kind of skills, like aiming, fighting, shooting, flying, jumping.
I really hope this helped you.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
I have not read to kill a mocking bird. sorry
