I personally think that’s only something that you can write.
Victor assaults his investigations with excitement and, overlooking his public activity and his family far away in Geneva, gains quick ground. Later, Ardently dedicating himself to this work, he ignores everything else; family, companions, studies, and public activity, and becomes progressively pale, desolate, and fixated.
On the first one is D. They don't bother anyone
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Editing is more focused on grammar and style issues where revision is more a holistic and continual process.
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