Jesting with them and turning their hunger for food into homesickness
take in calories that you will burn or just work out a lot.
Answer:
Wasn't it that they were just curious.
Explanation:
I'm only 80% sure that's right though
Answer:needs to be short and energetic, and reveal your character.
Explanation:
DON’T: Summarize.=“that’s when I realized” and “I learned” and “the most important thing was…
DO: End in the action.=Don’t ruin the moment. End earlier. say more to keep it interesting.
Try this site called The muse it gives guidelines for editing writing