Question

Choose the best revision to the following sentence.A. While listening to the WebEx presentation, my computer speakers malfunctioned.B. While I was listening to the WebEx presentation, my computer speakers malfunctioned.C. My computer speakers malfunctioned while listening to the WebEx presentation.

Answer 1

Answer:

The best revision is;

While I was listening to the WebEx presentation, my computer speakers malfunctioned .

Explanation:

The best revision to the given sentence is Statement B.  

The statement in sentence A, does not clarifies who was listening to the presentation.

The statement in sentence B is correctly understandable and clear. This statement clearly identifies that who was listening the WebEx presentation and what happened with the computer speakers. It is easy to understand.

The statement in sentence C is quite fragmented and is not comprehensive.