Answer:
I identified six....
* adding the comma in the number
* the capitalized E in Egyptians
* 'a lot' is 2 words, not one (though, 'a lot like' should be written as 'similar to')
* 'ares' is spelled 'ours'
* a question mark has been added
* the word 'over' should be written as 'more than'
Explanation:
Would you believe that more than 7,000 years ago ancient Egyptians liked to bowl on alleys a lot like (similar to) ours?
The anser would be c mark me brainliest
Answer:
"How about", my mom asked, "we make sandwiches".

I don't recommend using the first person pronoun in an argumentative essay. Unless your instructor suggests that you do so, omit it from the assignment because your writing will read better without it.