she was at the beach
she wore this white dress
with a red a blue flower
with a hat
and was really pretty
and you
you were happy
and then there was a sunset
the end
Answer:
The kind of error that occurs is:
B. a pronoun shift error.
Explanation:
Take a look at the following sentence:
"One could have done better if we had studied harder."
See how the sentence begins by using "one" and then suddenly shifts to "we"? This is an example of a pronoun shift error. The pronoun "we" does not agree with "one".
Let's analyze another example:
"Someone is knocking; and they seem to be in a hurry."
Although that is a common structure in colloquial speech, it is incorrect. "Someone" is a third-person singular word, so the pronouns that refer to it should be "he" or "she". "They" is a third-person plural pronoun. Therefore, this example too shows a pronoun shift error.
She went on the ride at the park. (The correct way to put it in a sentence)
Answer:
Hans Wolf and Jim Macpherson shared the cake Connie had baked. They talked about Bathsheba, Gabriel Oak, Sergeant Troy and Dorset. They even talked about the books they liked. They agreed about everything.
Answer(s):
1.) Increased awareness of the dangers of ocean pollution are creating interest in Pozzi's art.
2.) B - "She now has...requests from overseas."
I hope I got these, I skimmed through the article...
A little tip, my eigth grade english teacher taught me this a long time ago, but the longest answer (especially when it pertains to an article) is usually the right one.