Answer:
I hope I edit it right!
Explanation:
Hello, I am Fartun Aden I would be a great team member because, I am hardworking and I had a previous job as a babysitter for my Aunt. I was great at it, and I know if you give me the chance to work here you won't regret having me.
A thesis belongs in the introduction of an argumentative essay
Answer:
to make the countries future
The mistakes:
• “I hear you will go to Paris last month”
Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.”
• “I am sure you will.”
Should be- “I’m sure you did.”
• “Will you see Sophia...”
Should be- “Did you see Sophia...”
• “I did heard Ridley...”
Should be- “I did hear Ridley...”
• “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
• “He will be doing very well.”
Should be- “He was doing very well.”
• “It was called U.T...
Should be- “It is called U.T...”
• “You must saw it.”
Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
Hope this helps; have a good day! :)
Answer:
nice because people want to be with with you and help you
Explanation:
what I think is that admiring g is a key word and being g admired is actually nice so the 'nice' part really fits. I dont really get the big part though
