Researchers working along with Doctor Levitin studied patients who were about to have a procedure. Participants were asked to either listen to music or take pills. Scientists tracked patient's ratings of their own worrying, as well as the levels of Cortisol.
The results were fascinating; the participants who decided to listen to music were more relaxed and less stressed than their counterparts who took medication.
Answer:
1. On the third line you wrote enormus, it's meant to be enormous
2. "you would always be put down and act like you were less than a person by white people" - I don't really understand what your trying to imply
3. "While using public transportation you were treated like a " - Use 'Black people' not 'you' since this is the subject.
4. "Colored people were even forced to sit in the back of the bus even if it was empty. " - I thought they were meant to stand?
5. "find a colored bathroom because some" - What colour bathroom?
6. "6 million of them around 1924." - Good use of statistics
7. " the KKK also" - The place where you mention Ku Klux Klan, put in brackets KKK
Overall, this is a strong 500-word essay. This is a good and informative essay as well so you should be proud of yourself.
Explanation:
He claims it is an unnecessary action of a coward
I saw this in the early days working with my cousins. A lot of them were having trouble with math at first, because they had all of these gaps accumulated in their learning. And because of that, at some point they got to an algebra class and they might have been a little bit shaky on some of the pre-algebra, and because of that, they thought they didn’t have the math gene. Or they’d get to a calculus class, and they’d be a little bit shaky on the algebra. I saw it in the early days when I was uploading some of those videos on YouTube, and I realized that people who were not my cousins were watching
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