E<span>ncourage people to be in touch with nature, to be true to themselves, and to be morally grounded.</span>
1.) the money will soon finish
Answer:
Posting personal information online, such as pictures and thoughts, cannot be permanently deleted. Others could find it, which can affect career or school options even years into the future.
Explanation:
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For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
The first sentence.
Ted and I cannot convince Steve to change, because he must first convince himself.