Question

A trip to the ocean can be a relaxing escape from the everyday pressures of life. A sailboat glistening on the horizon provides a mental escape to faraway places. The rhythm of the ocean beating against the sand is sedating music to a troubled mind. A slow, gentle breeze can relax your tensions. You should always be careful to avoid overexposure to the sun at the beach. 1.a.Write the sentence that is the topic sentence of the paragraph. b.Write the sentence that is unrelated to the topic and can be eliminated. 2.List four things to look for when you’re proofreading. 3.Complete the following two steps: a. Define the term cliché. b. Use a cliché in a sentence that you create. 4.Name and explain two types of prewriting.

Answer 1

The topic sentence is always going to be the first sentence. A trip to the ocean can be a relaxing escape from the everyday pressures of life.

4 things you need to look for when proofreading is spelling, punctuation, proper order of the events and transition words.

cliché: a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought

it was only the icing on the cake.

 freewriting and researching. When freewriting you write any and every idea that comes to mind when prewriting researching is another name for prewriting you get information from outside sources.

Answer 2

1. A Trip to the ocean can be relaxing escape from the everyday pressure of life.
2. You should always be careful to  avoid over exposure to the sun at the beach.
3. 2.         Spelling,Punctuation, Proper order and Transition words.
4. 3.  A.   A Cliche is a Phrase or Opinion that is overused and betrays a lack original thought.
5.     B.   I consider myself as a Diamond in the rough.
6. 4 Researching and Pre-writting  When you write a idea that comes to mind when pre-writting,Researching is another name for pre-writting you get your information from a outside source.
7. 5. To Prepare for a test is really simple.You Have to at least know about the topic.
8.    Outline the syllabus for the topic. Which is the lessons and the test. You have to learn the topic presents in the syllabus. After that turn the paper in , completed with the detailed answers
9. Jaliyah