No at least I don’t think so.
Answer:
you are missing some commas
Explanation:
the sentence should be
The sun was just slipping below the horizon when aunt Nakki , who had ridden her camel from the sultry areas. to the south, arrived at our camp
Sounds very interesting. Do you know the name, by any chance?
Madame Schachter saw a vision on Jews burning and fire, leading to her screaming out in anguish and trying to tell everyone around her what she saw. Hope this helps :) Madame Schachter saw a vision on Jews burning and fire, leading to her screaming out in anguish and trying to tell everyone around her what she saw.
Answer:
the 3rd sentence in the second paragraph, does not need to be their because it just describes an unimportant part
Explanation:
