C) losing one's home and sense of identity
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I don't find the paragraph to be too wordy at all. I don't understand the entire context of the paragraph, only because I don't know the topic that it is written on. Despite this, I was still able to follow the meaning of the paragraph.
Something that I did notice is that you have one run-on sentence in your paragraph. You wrote "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture, she photobombed a family picture, they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original and didn't want her in it, she cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
Instead, you could reword it into multiple different sentences to make the idea complete. I would recommend you turn this section into: "The only thing they solved was why Hope was in that picture. She photobombed a family picture and they gave her the printed version because they deleted the original one and didn't want her in it. She cut the family out and wrote on the back, 'Don't go to the subway.'"
I hope this helps you! Have a lovely day!
- Mal
Answer:
At the end of the main story, Sly declares his intention to tame his own wife as Petruchio has tamed Katherine. Critics disagree about why Shakespeare begins The Taming of the Shrew with the Induction.
Explanation:
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A rough draft is the preparation for a final essay and as I see it a rough draft may contain all of the elements mentioned in the given options. For example, prepositions, nouns and adverbs are also sure to be included, since it is a written piece and these are central components of any language. Transitions will probably be utilized, as you will probably build up a few points in your exposition and should change from thought to thought.
