Only one among the eight seniors chose to volunteer and help the Italian Club with its fundraiser. Consequently, the club's budget will be less than anticipated.
1. Capitalize only since it's the first word of the sentence.
2 and 3. Write out the numbers one and eight since they are below ten.
4. Between should be changed to among. You can only be between two things, yet there are eight seniors.
5. Choose needs to be chose as it's the past tense.
6. Italian Club should be capitalized since it's a proper noun.
7. Fundraiser is one word.
8. There should be a period after fundraiser as it is the end of a complete idea.
9. Consequently must be capitalized since its the first word of the sentence.
10. There needs to be a comma after consequently because it's an introductory transition word.
11. Since the club owns the budget it needs to have an apostrophe to show ownership.
12. Then must be than. Then shows time while than shows comparison.
