Answer: Are we suppose to edit this writing or what?
Explanation: I am confused.
Your answer is going to be D! The reason that C is not right, is because after 'he added' there should be a comma, to pause before speaking the dialogue.
The concluding paragraph of your essay should restate and expand on your claim.
The main purpose of your concluding paragraph is to close out your essay. Typically, this involves restating and expanding your original thesis or claim from your introduction.
You don't want to add more supporting evidence here, as that should all be in your essay's body. The concluding paragraph is where you sum everything up altogether and close out the essay with your final thoughts.
The correct answer is B.....
