I believe its D. The author provides commonsense examples to refute the counterclaim :)
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
The correct answer is their. Because his or her wouldn't make sense because it says they, his also wouldn't make sense for that reason, and the other form of there means for example, "over there"
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the answer is A During war
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