Explanation:
Sir,
I wish to draw your attention towards the poor maintenance of roads and lights in our locality. The roads in our locality have not been repaired for a long time. There are pits and ditches on the roads everywhere. The condition of the road becomes all the worst during the rainy season. They cause road accident. At night people sometimes stumble down. Moreover, these pits provide breeding ground for the mosquitoes. Thus there is an outbreak of mosquitoes in the locality leading to the spread of malaria.
Besides, most of the street lights in our locality are out of order. Only a few street lights are functioning. It is darkness in the locality. It has caused a spurt in the incidence of crime in the area. People do not find it safe to go out of their houses with the prevailing of darkness. There are frequent incidents of chain snatching in the evening hours. Particularly ladies are unsafe in coming out of their houses in the dark. Snatching, burglary and theft have become the order of the day.
I, therefore, request you to kindly take necessary action to mend the ways so that people of the area have good roads and street lights.
Thanking you,
Answer:
Scan your draft to catch typing mistakes.
Review your word choice to ensure the writing is in formal style.
Explanation:
During the editing stage, you need to make sure that your work has no typing errors and the word choices that are being used must convey the exact meaning that needs to be conveyed.
Editing stage also requires you to see if the paragraphs are in the order they need to be and the quotations are properly cited according to the given citation rules.
B is correct "Dozens" is spelled correctly. As for the other sentences their is incorrect spelling. :)
