It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
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the answer is C. Give readers a reason to care about the character
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Whenever someone sees injustice happening around them , they should stand up.
It's not only about the teenagers , it is the duty of every human being who has even a glimmer of humanity in them to stand up for those in need , to stand up for help, to stand for injustice.
The fact that whether teenagers should stand up for injustice in the absence of a support is the question risen here.
Well I think they should.
Most people get scared to do so, mostly not because they are coward , but rather for the fact that " Why should I stand up for it when it doesn't bother others" .
It is one of the most inhumane thing one could tell to themselves.
I suggest them to stand up for justice but by not being aggressive but through nonviolence.
Im not sure
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