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Firstly, i think it will be better to say Wandering outside, instead of wandering around outside.
Secondly, "we've never met before" is a better term than we've never before met.
Thirdly, Expressions aren't included e.g If he thinks I am staying in this dreadful place he is surely mistaken,” turning my face away with hands akimbo I replied in a sulky voice “He abducted me and ...
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<span>Well, this question is the tricky one! Actually, there wasn't left any marks, it is the main problem of this story. So in “Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard” by Thomas Gray, NO marks have the forefathers left on history? and according to this fact the only one correct answer is definitely the third option from the scale represented above - The forefathers have left no mark on history, having led “noiseless” lives.</span></span>
to start a new era in his life
