Answer:
<u>STARTING LINE</u>
My most memoriable trip was to Pakistan, this was because i had never experienced being in a unique surrounding filled with so much happiness, joy and excitement ......
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<u>THEN U CAN TALK ABOUT THE PEOPLE AND ENVIRONMENT WHICH HELPED MAKE</u><u> </u><u>i</u><u>T A MEMORIABLE EXPERIENCE</u>
The people there are so humble and caring and welcomed me with happiness, they were also very content as they were grateful for many things which people here where i live would genrally complain about etc.
<u>U CAN TALK ABOUT UR JOURNEY TOWARDS THE LOCATION AND LINK IT WITH WHY IT WAS MEMORIABLE</u>
I was nervous for the journey going to Pakistan as i had never been in a plane before.
As i gazed out of the window towards the beautiful scenary i .......(u can finish the sentence)
<u>ENDING</u>
This was my most memoriable experience as i had never been to any other country before and i had such an outstanding experience, i would love to go again.....
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Explanation:
Here r a few points u could add or consider
It's best if u add more bits to it to make it more descriptive but this was to help u get an idea of what to write.
Based on my experience btw :)
hope it helped
Answer:The age limit of voting is a significant part of voting, but like all rights and laws, they have a limit. This limit has changed over time and has expanded voting rights tremendously.
At first, the voting age was 21 years old, and only men could vote, but that changed when women were able to vote but the age stayed the same. Then, the amendment change to where you could vote even if you were of a different race, but the age stayed the same.
Eventually, on June 22, 1970, President Richard Nixon signed the Voting Rights Acts that required the voting age to be 18 in all elections. This expanded voting rights so much, the age had been lowered by 3 years for all Americans for all elections.
Expanding voting rights this much, allowed people from younger ages to be able to vote on who and what they thought would be best.
B. The sentence that has an error in usage is the following one: Sometimes being a man simply means helping others bare their difficult burdens. The word "bare" in this sentence should be the word "bear" which means "to help endure or carry."
It is best when drafting to proofread. I am very bad at this so I need to work on it. It is important because you need to check which sentences don't belong or what words have too many silent e's.
