Hello!
What you have so far is solid and straight-to-the-point. However, I would adjust it slightly in order to be more shocking to your audience.
Here is my suggestion: "Smog pollution is affecting earth's air quality and is causing the planet's temperature to rise at a rapid rate, which can be detrimental to all of earth's species if it is not controlled soon."
I am not entirely sure what your topic is or what you intend to persuade your audience into believing, so you can change what I have written into what works best for your essay. I would recommend adding an interesting/scary fact into it in order to convince your audience of the importance of your topic.
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
- Mal
To the audience is whom the author is writing the article
Answer:
In the story "Rules of the game" by Tiger and Rose has five main elements of structure which are:
exposition, rising action. climax, falling action and resolution. i will be explaining the five elements below:
Explanation:
The Exposition: The exposition of the story is when we learn that Waverly Jong (the narrator), lives in Chinatown. and how she relates with her family. When she says " we lived in a place, in a warm, clean, two bedroom flat that sat above a small Chinese bakery specializing in steamed pastries and dim sum"
The climax of the story is when Waverly ran away from home when her mother was taking pride in her. This is the climax because it is the turning point of the story. here is the height of tension where the reader wonders wether Waverly can survive on her own.
The rising action of the story is when Waverly returns home and her mother used the silence treatment on her.
The falling action of the story is when waverly was running and find out that she could not live independently nor completely avoid her family. she said "I ran until it hurt and i realized i had nowhere to go, that i was not running from anything."
The resolution is when she said "I closed my eyes and wondered my next move."
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Explanation:next time put more point. and use for back up
B it talks about them and describes what they are wearing
