Question

I need help putting together a thesis statement for, "A Good Man Is Hard To Find" by Flannery O'Connor. So far, the thesis statement I have is this: In the short story, “A Good Man Is Hard To Find”, the author Flannery O’Connor, will show you that no matter how respectful and nice you are to people like the grandmother, when it comes to devious and disrespectful just like the misfit, you always have second chance to make transformation.
I need help with transforming it to sound better. I want to build it around Christianity because O'Connor always talked about murder and Christ. Could someone be generous enough to help me please! Thanks!

Answer 1

ADVISE : First off, never start your thesis statement off like " i'm going to tell you" or " In this." you want to grab the reader, and make the reader want to read more. You could start your thesis with a quote from O'Conner or a random quote about your subject. This tends to grab the reader, if they like the quote. You may also start your your thesis with a question that you may think people will have about the short story, or you had  while reading the short story, you MUST answer this question in your writing though. Secondly, try not to make your thesis so long, this may lead the reader to bordome, but also dot make your thesis to short