It does... but how about you replace the last line with "they remained the hosts". If you did that, I would say change line 3 to ghosts instead of ghost.
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Answer:
B, On September 23, 1999, NASA officials were aghast when the $125 million Mars Climate Orbiter vanished as it prepared to enter the red planet’s orbit.
Explanation:
The use of word imagery and mystery make this a good intro sentence. MAKE SURE IT MAKES SENSE THOUGH! I can't see which sentence is supposed to come after this, so make sure it makes sense with the paragraph
Answer:
The art or process of producing images by the action of radiant energy and especially light on a sensitive surface
