Answer:
I think the most helpful way to create a more formal and professional tone is to eliminate the informal language.
Explanation:
The paragraph has phrases like "<em>off the hook</em>", or homeless "<em>peeps</em>" that are not accurate for a formal request. If those words or phrases are changed for more formal ones, the whole request will sound more serious and important.
Allusion
Alliteration= occurrence of a letter, we don’t have that.
Allusion=expression designed to call something to mind without mentioning it explicitly. ‘ an allusion to Shakespeare’
Onomatopoeia=sound associated ‘ sizzle’
Simile= needs words like or as
1. Whenever I hear that music, it reminds me of the time we read about the Titanic
2. Many people who heard that music did not survive. I get sad listening to it.
4. It was such a tragedy that could've been avoided
Answer:yes what do you need
Explanation:
2. It was a traditional, delicious, Italian meal.
3. We stayed in a luxurious, modern, 20-floor hotel.
4. She planted some roses in a large, ceramic, flower pot.
5. We need a black, round, metal table for our balcony.
6. They found and old, dusty shoe under the bed.
7. He bought her a huge, diamond, engagement ring.
Can I get brainliest, please? ^^