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Inga [223]
3 years ago
14

Write an arctile on window right in Ghana in the national news paper​

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1 answer:
noname [10]3 years ago
7 0

Answer:

6 March is the nation's Independence Day and 1 July is now celebrated as Republic Day. At the time of independence Nkrumah declared.

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