The second choice is puncuted correctly.
Slow drivers concern you because you might be late to go to something for example interview or meeting up with a friend
The first was informative and no real emotion captured whilst the second one holds bold emotion that lets off excitement and descriptive tone that paints a picture of the scene taking place putting the reader in the onlookers home watching the events unfold. The first being third person you could only get a basic idea of what is happening, but the first person had us with them watching in the stormy night.
It is similar because a literary nonfiction, is real, and so is an autobiography
If i remember right from when i read it, Pavel is the butler correct? if it is, i do believe we learn that he was a Jewish doctor till Hitler started concentration camps, and the discrimination of Jews, and all those people.