Answer:
Cheesy adjectives and add many many unnecessarily fluffy descriptions
Explanation:
All you need to do is maybe replace "felt happy" with "her heart pounded with happiness"/"walked down the school hallway" to "excitedly waltzed down the hallway and into the basking rays of the radiant sun" or something of the such and some dialogue lines in between Denise and her mom.
I think you'll be fine for vivid descriptions and strong imagery as long as you elaborate on Denise's feelings a bit more. I'll give you some bits you can use: "a warm smile", "stomach fluttered", "'I'm proud of the results of my hard work!'"
Anything cheesy should be perfectly enough to satisfy your teacher.
(Apologies that I have not given you a paragraph to copy-paste. Hopefully these pointers can guide you a bit :))
Answer:
the dresses were designed by Lolita
John once was a jester
he was always seen as a heckler
but he then met a girl in a dream
she was covered in orange cream
he found this to be extremely interesting
as she found her attire to be frustrating
he made an offer she couldn't resist
as he said he would solve her problem with a flick of the wrist
they both watched closely as he did his trick
he made her feel quite the fool as the watch on hist wrist began to tick
she was filled with wonder at what mysterious act he would do and that feeling soon began to fester
he began to laugh at this cruel trick as he said "I'll always be a jester".
I am not 100% sure, but I want to say it is D
