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Norgay develops event in “The Dream Comes True altering them. So it could be
said that the correct option is A Norgay alternates descriptions of the difficulties
he and Hillary had on Mount Everest with examples of how their accounts of the
climb differed, because Hillary would later add or change some elements which
were different from Norgay version
Example:
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FedEx Corporations (Kyle Williams: Principal Manager)
December 26, 2021
Mrs. Anna Hodges
Johnson's Professional Stationary Services
5678 Wiley Street
Hamilton Bay NJ, 89765
Dear Mrs. Hodges,
I would like to re-inform you that your application for the box of card-stock will not be received on time, because of the upcoming holiday. Most of our workers are taking a vacation, and I am sorry to say that your boxes will not be arriving anytime soon.
We will oblige to giving you a discount, and a complementary FedEx key-chain. We also hope that you will use our service sometime soon.
Have a great Christmas, and congrats on getting your new home.
Sincerely,
FedEx Corporations (Kyle Williams: Principal Manager)
<u>Example Order</u>
<em>Sender's Contact Information (Some letters have the phone number and email.)</em>
<em>Date</em>
<em>Receiver's Contact Information</em>
<em>Greetings (It is very professional to greet the Receiver with formal greeting terms.)</em>
<em>Body (Some letters start with a subject, so that the Receiver can understand the what the letter is conveying.)</em>
<em>Closing</em>
<em>Signature (Most people prefer a handwritten signature for formal purposes. It makes the receiver feel like you spent time on the letter.)</em>
Explanation:
I have found interpunction mistakes in lines:
- in ''Something, or somebody I know is worth my time'' There should be no comma interpunction after ''Something''.
- ''When you're broken down, and have the same pain you've felt a thousand times.'' There should be no comma after ''Down''.
Also, another mistake that I have found is in:
- ''Who does good, loves, and never ever lies.'' The mistake here is in ''never ever''. There should be no ''ever'' word because ''never ever'' is creating a tautology.
