The Preamble is the opening articulation to the United States Constitution. The prelude clarifies the reasons why the Framers of the Constitution made our legislature a republic. And with this, the establishing fathers supplanted the Articles of Confederation. Further, the Preamble can be divided into numerous essential phrases. These expressions are imperative for understanding the motivation behind the constitution of the United States.
When we discuss the accompanying expression, “Secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity”, the purpose of this in the Preamble and the constitution, in general, is to protect the nation's rights for freedom, legitimate laws, and opportunities from an oppressive government.
But, if the expressed objective of the Constitution is to protect the Blessings of independence, against whom are those rights being secured? It ought to be self-evident, I trust, that one plan of the Constitution is to shield our Liberties even from our Government. Moreover, if something turns out bad, the central government must amend the Constitution to fit the prosperity of the society and its people.
If I like it: Yes, I like this poem. It seems/feels so intimate, yet somehow I feel connected to the character.
What emotions are there:I believe the emotions a reader would feel would be sorrow, pity, despair, grief, and helplessness because he/she has no power to help the abused.
What I would add to make it better: I probably wouldn't, perhaps start posting it publicly to sites like 'Wattpad', to get a wider perspective from public comments.
Mainly words with strong negative connotations
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