The most important part about your paragraph is the thesis or the topic sentence. Once you have established this make sure your paragraph always relates back to your topic and make sure to provide examples of your topic. You then want to end your paragraph with a sentence the restates your thesis or topic.
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Answer:
She was in university and she made some bad friends. So the influenced her to do bad things with them, and because of that she skipped study hall so she can go to clubs with her friends, but one night they went out late clubbing and they returned to their dorms drunk but a teacher caught them and they went to the head mistress office. The head mistress expelled them from school because this was the fourth time they were caught drunk. The girl went to go pack but she decided she was not gonna go back home because she would disappoint her hard working parents so the became a homeless person instead..THE END
