This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
Hope this helps!
Answer:
The point the narrator is making when she says that Molly and Clarissa are both the same age is an imagery which shows that the old woman represents dance which takes away the bias against age.
Explanation:
In "Dancer" by Vickie Sears, Clarissa is a five year old foster girl from Assiniboin tribe. the narrator is the foster mother of Clarissa. Clarissa had been to different foster care homes, she had a hard life and she was always angry and had no love. Then after seeing Molly Graybull dance, Clarissa was mesmerized and found passion in dancing. Her character starts to improve and she started becoming more social.
Dancing made Clarissa happy and she felt like she has found her roots and inner piece. she was only five years old and Molly was seventy years old but they danced like they were both same age.
Answer:
I had a lover,
she was more like a fever,
to my parents,
the good one she ain't.
I told her sorry,
she became more angry.
I told my parents ,
they became arrogant.
I decide to let her go,
but her face would not .
I decide to leave my parents on the go,
but there face was like the cooking pot was hot.
Allas! I found a way ,
it is to get rid of them all,
yes, right now straight away.
By: meisbigbrain
Explanation:
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She went to Florida is the simple subject
Answer:1. Viewpoint. They're trying to make you see things their way. They're trying to show drunk driving is bad.
2. The techniques are if it is persuasive or informative and this is more informative.
3. I know the techniques are effective, they make you not want to drunk drive because you'll get caught and possibly arrested.
Explanation:
