(1) A new movement is spreading. (2) It is made up of people who want to change how we live and eat. (3) They want people to slo
w way on down. (4) They want to bring pleasure back into the way we eat. Which sentence should be changed so it has the right tone?
A. Sentence 2
B. Sentence 3
C. Sentence 4
D. Sentence 1
Stating that "they want people to slow way on down" does not have a clear message. Certain words need to be added and removed to make this understandable. Therefore, sentence 3 messes with the tone of the paragraph.
