Question

(1) A new movement is spreading. (2) It is made up of people who want to change how we live and eat. (3) They want people to slow way on down. (4) They want to bring pleasure back into the way we eat.
Which sentence should be changed so it has the right tone?
A. Sentence 2
B. Sentence 3
C. Sentence 4
D. Sentence 1

Answer 1

The answer to this question is:

Sentence 3

Stating that "they want people to slow way on down" does not have a clear message. Certain words need to be added and removed to make this understandable. Therefore, sentence 3 messes with the tone of the paragraph.

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