Change of tone. You can change the tone of your voice to make the story more compelling
I can try,
But what's the question?
According to Roman tradition, the Republic began in 509 BCE when a group of noblemen
overthrew the last king of Rome. The Romans replaced the king with two consuls--rulers
who had many of the same powers as the king but were elected to serve one-year terms
Can you put a clearer pic?
