Hi!
I think you've got the correct answer right there! (A conspicious writing).
My mission in life is to be a person for others. I want to share my talents and skills to other people. Aside from this, I want to extend my help especially to those in need. Everyday in my life, I would like to give positively impact to each person I meet.
Someday, I aspire to become a lawyer in which I believe is a great and respectable profession. I want to provide high quality legal services. I want to be known as someone who is innovative and excellent in creating legal solutions. By doing so, this will give fulfillment in my career and pride to my family.