I think the sentence that best supports this is "I will advise you and direct you. I should not be a man if this womanly helplessness did not just give you a double attractiveness in my eyes."
A metaphor is comparing two unlike objects without the use of the words like or as. Metaphors are usually symbolic. An alliteration is a group of words that have similar letters or sounds. Personification is giving an inanimate object the characteristics that a person would have. Sarcasm is the use of irony to mock. You must decide from here.
From what I remember, its personification, which is when you give inanimate or non-living objects (the sun) human characteristics (using the word peeked)
Not bad, i'd say. just make sure you add transitional words/phrases so that it all makes sense, okay? other than that, i really love it, great job!
also, it does include logos, pathos, and ethos.
