Answer:
Even though this question is missing the options, after analyzing the revision we can safely say it was made for <u>conciseness</u>.
Explanation:
Conciseness can be simply defined as saying a lot in just a few words. Notice how the original paragraph is much longer than the revised one. The writer gave much more information than what was truly necessary. Details such as "and that new procedures need to be initiated" and "who was sympathetic" are superfluous. The first one adds nothing of value. If the procedures are inadequate, it is quite obvious that new ones need to be initiated. Readers could infer that. The second one is permeated with subjectivity, not only making the paragraph longer, but also stating an opinion that in uncalled for in this context. By eliminating the extra words, the writer made the paragraph concise, using fewer words to express the necessary.
Answer:
what? i mean same but okay
Answer:
That *lean lady will *learn to *lean on the wall for support
You have to *wait to check your *weight now
There's no *sin in that *scene I've *seen so far
Hey there,
Your question states: <span>Which choice most effectively displays the concept of comparison and contrast?
Based on my understanding, the best option from your answers choices above,your correct answer would be </span>

. My reason on why I say that the answer would be "<span>While they are almost the same size, Earth and Venus have very different terrains." is basically because this would be a good compare and contrast. The other options have no click to it to make a concept of making a compare and contrast. Your correct answer would be D.
Correct answer : "</span><span>While they are almost the same size, Earth and Venus have very different terrains"
~Jurgen</span>
Answer:
Rainbow by Kacey Musgraves
Explanation:
The theme is that life can be hard but you'll get through it. An example of this in the song would be when Kacey sings "And you're stuck out in the same old storm again,you hold tight to your umbrella, but darling, I'm just tryin' to tell ya, that there's always been a rainbow hanging over your head". It is evidence because the rainbow over your head represents that you will get through the tough times. The "storm" refers to the tough times.