The community center is good for everyone to do all kinds of fun things when they want. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “The community center provides fun activities for everyone”

The proposed program will give every student in the county access to tutoring services. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.

Installing recycle bins at key points around the city will make recycling easier for our residents. (clear and concise) This sentence is easily read since it does not use many words to express the main ideas.

Many people have said there are not enough security guards at the mall, so the mall is unsafe and dangerous, and people don't want to shop there. (wordy and unclear) This sentence uses too many words with clauses that confuse the reader. Another way to express the same could be: “There aren’t enough security guards in the mall so people think it is dangerous and unsafe to shop there.”

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when you are writing a essay and you have to cited you evidence that do you put to replace the page number if you are using a we

valentina_108 [34]

If you found information in a book as well as a website then use both. dont erase the page number cause you never know what youll need it for. sence your using a website youshould give cretit to the places you got your information from and the pae number will count as a resource so i would prefer you to keep it.

you kinda worded it weird so if my answer doesnt help then im sorry.

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Answer:

that aint english my g

Explanation:

that aint english my g

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