You could search that up on the internet and change it into your own words.
I was found in the ground only to be brought up by rain left alone in a, field I bury back in yet I still feel the same
try living in my shoes they won’t fit
because I live in the earth
I spend about half my time, he spends two-thirds of his time, and she spends a quarter, or maybe a third, of her time on research.
The hyphen goes between two and thirds so that it is clear that two and third are connected. Hyphens are used when two words are used together to create one meaning. Two and thirds are used together to show that he only spent a fraction of his time (2/3) researching. In the other options about-half are two separate ideas about and half. The same with a and third; they both are not numbers.
Hello!
Your thesis is very thorough and gives your reader a clear idea of your topic. However, you can improve the punctuation so that it becomes two complete sentences rather than one run-on.
"Since the early 2000s, technology has made major improvements by creating more social media sites, virtual reality headsets, and updating mobile phones. However, people are relying more on technology for communication rather than face-to-face interaction."
This would be an appropriate way of writing your thesis without changing any of the wording. Otherwise, your thesis looks great!
I hope this helps you! Have a fantastic day!
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