It would humanize her and make her capable of sympathy.
<span>The writing is choppy.
I believe this is the answer. If the writing was connected, sentences would already be combined. Varied writing and lengthy writing usually has nothing to do with sentence combination.</span>
Hope this helps.
1. Jack have you ever gone to London?
2. Ben have you ever played the guitar?
3. Have your parents ever lived abroad?
4. Have you ever traveled on your own?
5. Has Nicola ever had a pet?