1. B
2. A
3. B
4. A
1. there are no directions or set criteria for the assignment
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
My aim in life is to become a violinist. I want to become a violinist because I am talented in playing the violin and I want to thank God for it. Also, I want to make money for my mom and make her happy. She always say "listening to me (don't wanna say my name) play makes my life so much happier". I want to keep playing the violin and get into a good university and then become famous, and then start teaching. When I teach, I want to teach as best as I can so that I can make my student famous.
