Answer:
is there a particular story or message youre trying to convey? here's just something off the top of my head picking up from after "sirens-":
<em>Stop trying to keep control,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,</em>
<em>Stop trying to keep control,My mind might feed on the guilt,I'm going silent for a while,So I'll let the roses wilt</em>,
sorry, I'm not amazing with lyrics lol
also maybe number the verses and make a chorus so it flows easier, most songs have a chorus that has a "catchy" melody and repeats a few times throughout the song, sometimes with little changes in lyrics.
it's not necessary (some songs don't have it) but just a suggestion :)
