Use the three-point general rubric to evaluate the paragraph. An Afternoon of Modern Art On saturday, I went to the Bates County
Museum of Art with my parents. We saw the new modern art exhibit, and it was pretty strange. There were one painting that didn’t really look like anything but slattered paint. Another painting was made out of foil and torn paper. There were also lots of crazy statues made out of metal, bottles, and cans. One even made out of bicycle parts. Did I mention that we ate lunch first? Anyway, the exhibit might be interesting for somebody who like modern art. Three-Point General Rubric Points Criteria 3 The writing is clearly focused on the task. A main idea is well-developed and supported with relevant details. There are almost no errors in grammar,spelling, and punctuation. 2 The writing is related to the task but generally lacks focus. Support for the main idea is not clear or is missing. There are a few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. 1 The writing is not focused on the task. There is no clear main idea. There are many errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation. How does this passage meet the first criterion in the rubric? The writing is not focused on the art exhibit at all. Only some of the writing is focused on the exhibit. The writing is clearly focused on the modern art exhibit. All sentences except the one are focused on the exhibit.
the sentence contains a misplaced/dangling modifier. the phrase, <em>sailing into the harbor, </em>modifies something unclearly stated in the sentence.
