She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool,

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Rudiy27

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She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool,

brisk swim. Which is the best revision of this sentence?

English

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KatRina [158] · Answer 1 · 2022-05-15T21:24:03+03:00

KatRina [158]3 years ago

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She met her friends in the bottom floor of the hotel, the lobby, so they could head over to the pool for a cool, brisk swim.

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ra1l [238] · Answer 2 · 2022-05-15T22:53:09+03:00

ANSWER: She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.

EXPLANATION: The sentence has only been re-framed and thus the answer has been formed. Revisions are generally done by repeating and rearranging the words in the sentence again and again.