It's an informative piece, one to tell the reader about facts and not your opinions <span />
Answer:
Tom has more money than the other Puritans, and he certainly makes the people in the church aware of his presence. He's well liked and respected.... but his journey into the afterlife doesn't work out to well for him..... Thus, the other prominent citizens are better off.
Explanation:
Since this is a poem and you have a comma after river bank, the answer would be Halting because it is starting a new line. River should not be capitalized in this sentence because it is not a proper noun. It is just a common noun.
Answer:
Add a 'separation' word
Explanation:
See how there are two 'before', add another word to separate them so it sounds less choppy!