Write a 5 sentence paragraph that uses a life or death situation to create suspense

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It was a feeling I had never felt before. My hands and feet tingling under the pressure of the earth surrounding. The sand entering itself into every available space in my body, and slowly watching the ground move closer and closer towards my neck. I struggled, moving my body towards the solid sand, but it only made the sand creep up faster. I fluttered my eyelids, once, twice, and a third time until my breath was cut off by the pressure of sand pressing against my throat as I sunk deeper, and deeper. I took a breath and breathed in that hot air like I never had before. I closed my eyes and held my eyes closed as the sand pulled me into the earth.

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larisa86 [58]

I think the future will be awesome with more technology.

Its both good and bad, good that we will have more advantages but bad if people abuse them and rely on them too much.

No, no big event is going to happen, bad things are already happening now like the disasters happening in countries today so i would say its just going to get worse.

The future without oil will be bad, we use oil for food, cars, and more so without we're in big trouble but i hope we find a way.

I think the future looks like the picture i added below, a apocalypse where nothing good happens, i mean I'm not a dark person who sees the negative all the time but I'm wise enough to see the next step so i know its going to be bad.

Big invention? i hope to see flying cars and flying hoverboards that could improve transportation

*i take no credit for image below i just found it off google.