Answer:
The new Jason movie left everyone in the theater aghast.
The donations for the local food drive were ample.
I thought I had seen an apparition of my Great-Grandfather.
The male wolf had to assert his dominance.
The school bully made everyone cower as he walked the halls.
Explanation:
According to "Make it New," the type of traditional poetry that most strongly influenced modernist poets was the "haiku." A number of modernist poets were influenced by the poetic form of the haiku. The form of the haiku focus on providing precise and focused images and ideas, with very little direct commentary or observation from the author. A number of Modernist poets, who felt that poetry should exclude the direct view point of the author and provide a sharp and distinct image in words, found this ancient poetic form to be attractive and useful.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
