Answer: Replace “to be” verbs with action verbs. “To be” verbs are passive and static, serving only to transmit information as statements of fact.
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Tom Robinson is a Black man who works in a cotton field in Maycomb. He is a generous man and a model citizen who is well liked by his employer and by members of the Black community. At twenty-five years old, he has a wife and children. He is accused of raping a white woman, Mayella Ewell, and is put on trial. The guards think of him as any other black man and they even try justifying shooting him
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