Answer:
okay this would be my answer, and if you cant use this for yourself i hope if could be a good example for your answer!
Explanation:
i would like to play soccer for PSG. i want to choose this career path because ive worked on it from the time i was 3 years old. i still love the sport so much, and for the rest of my life, if i make it or not, i will find a way to be involved in the sport. when i retire i am going to spread awareness for poor youth coaching, and toxic teams because when i was 8 i played for a club with a coach who would use verbally abuse me.
whatever you all choose to do, make sure you love it, and rather you are a store worker, a athlete, or anything be the best you can be, i wish you all the best in your career, you can be anything, even if it seems you cant, you can!
All you have to do is restate your topic sentence but in a different way and make your point more clear.
(C) “prewriting to gather your ideas”
(D) “drafting to organize your ideas”
<span>(E)“making revisions to make sure your ideas are logical”</span>
